Wednesday, August 6, 2008

My First

爱没了,想念成为习惯..寂寞成孤单..

夜然人更寂寞, 然你更心痛..风然你更迷惑更失落...在深夜里,一种温度..人无法理解..

书理的玫瑰,是爱恋,
人的温度是无法想像的温暖..

我开是懂了体会失眠..享受漫长的夜!

陌生人,你懂我的心情吗? 今晚的我也放手了...
不在活在你的温暖..

今夜,我活在我一个人梦幻...


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听见了 吗?

p/s: i wrote this years ago. it sounds corny but i tried my best. For those who knows me, I do not receive any form of official Chinese education. I apologize should there be any mistake..

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

I don't receive official chinese education too. And err... a complete banana here. I can only catch what you wrte abit, and i'd say it's a beautiful piece. Why nv continue to write like that?

Roses said...

Dear Cleff
it's quite normal to be a banana nowadays. as long as we can understand abit of our own language, i think that will do.

beautiful piece?!?! well, thanks~~
cause i could never write with such inspiration already. hehehehe...i talk like an artist now -_-

Pete said...

I am a product of our education. Sadly, I did not pick up
Mandarin. Wow, for someone that does not have any official Chinese education, you certainly can write well.

Anonymous said...

You speak cantonese, pete? I also think she write well, considering that she did not receive any official chinese education. =.= unlike me.... cannot write anytthing like her to save my life. :-(

Heyz, heys, remember wish ur mom happy bday for me, ok?

warrior2 said...

roses, translate them for us who dont know the language. Thanks

Roses said...

Dear Pete
hehe..thanks for the compliment. i struggle when i wrote this. anyway, it's worth it

Dear Cleff
u dont need mandarin to save ur life.well, at least not in our country. english and BM will do just fine..
alright. thanks for the bday wish. the world world will celebrate it tonite sharp at 12-INDIRECTLY :)

Dear Warrior2
it's hard to translate. i tried using babelfish for translation and i never knew the meaning got distorted in such a humorous way..sorry

Pete said...

Clef : My cantonese also simply hentam one! The waiters always go crazy when taking my food order. LOL

Anonymous said...

Of course I do... :-( i need all these banana language to speak to my mom outlaw and her entire clan. She don't do english.... Damn. :-(

Same here, pete. Everytime I also end up speaking some 'engurish' with those waiter. Adeiihhh!

Anyway, Rose,I actually come here for more updates, and also... hahaha, wish your mom a happy birthday, officially. Hope she have many happy returns, and live a healthy and happy life in many years to come. ^_^v

Roses said...

Dear Cleff,
life is learning. i am sure u will pick up the language soon enough. by then ur outlaw's clan will be damn proud of u knowing that u purposely learn a lang for them.

alright. is that a hint for update. hehehehe..i will write something soon..thanks for the bday wishes.

Calvin Soo KJ said...

all : hey! looks like our "gang" are all siang chiou ren (banana poeple)...hahaha. I can converse in cantonese, but have to watch our for the pronounciation. as for mandarin, i'm having tuition with my wife. you should see the rotan marks on my legs...hehehe.

Roses said...

dear ALL
our very own banana tribal. i do cantonese too but somehow with weird accent.
very nice of u to start learning from your wife now..hehehe...rotan nevermind, cause that will train u to have thicker skin.soon to be immune

Calvin Soo KJ said...

sudah pun......